CWeb+Wiki+D

=**Student** Reviewers: Carlie, Evie, Miranda and Mikaela=

Topic reviewed: Collaboration Web Wiki - Impact on Science and Health
Are the creators of the website doctors? Who posts things on this website? Are they qualified to do so? How can people working and writing together help with the aids crisis? || They need to finish all areas. Above the main page it says there were 18 students, but it would be nice to know who was working on this page. ||
 * Criteria Descriptors || Student Reviewer Feedback ||
 * **Quality of Content** ||  ||
 * Does the content (writing) make sense? || Most of it does, but some grammar and spelling mistakes make it hard to understand. Some of us didn't really get it. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || To add the names of group members, or to inform viewers of whether it was an individual effort. The environment and health section hasn't been finished ||
 * Pose three questions that arise from your reading || What is the address for the wiki flu site?
 * **Communication** ||  ||
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">There has been no discussion on this tab. It seems only one person has written this post. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Do they need more? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Yes, definitely. They should have more people to talk about their subjects so it becomes more effective. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Are they clear in their messages to each other? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">There is none. There is only one person talking. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">No. There is no one else contributing. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">**Collaboration** ||  ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Does the work appear to be equally shared? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">It seems as though there is only one person, but it could have been a group or individual- there are no names listed. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">There is a few grammar and spelling mistakes, but it doesn’t seem, like they’ve had any problems.  ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">**Presentation - Layout and Design** ||  ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">There are no graphics or images. It would have made for a more appealing website and it would be more interesting and easy to understand. Without the pictures it made it a bit boring. Images would have broken up the text. ||
 * <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Recommendations? || <span style="font-family: Century Gothic,sans-serif">Add some pictures, clarify who worked on this project- was it a group or just one person?