CWeb+Wiki+A

=**Student** Reviewers: Shalini, Michelle, Rachel=

Topic reviewed: Collaboration Web Wiki - Impact on Education

 * Criteria Descriptors || Student Reviewer Feedback ||
 * ** Quality of Content ** || ||
 * Does the content (writing) make sense?

|| Yes the content does make sense although the some of the vocabulary was not clear to us. Used too many big words which made it less clear. ||
 * Can you identify any areas which need to be clearer?

|| Yes you need to clarify the main points and how collaboration webs really help us in our work. It would be good to tell us more about collaboration and how it helps students ||
 * What are three questions you would like to ask from your reading?

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 * ** Communication ** || ||
 * Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication?

|| In the discussion pages we can see that the communication is very effective because it reads like a discussion. ||
 * Do they need more?

|| You don't need any more from what we could tell ||
 * Are they clear in their messages to each other?

|| Yes you are clear in your messages to each other although theire is a bit of repitition ||
 * Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration?

|| Yes there is real team work and unity. ||
 * ** Collaboration ** || ||
 * Does the work appear to be equally shared?

|| It looks as though Bianca's got all the information ||
 * Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team?

|| Yes there is one: who is going to be the editor. They are concerned about how to do it, not the content ||
 * ** Presentation - Layout and Design ** || ||
 * Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that

|| The layout could be better. There are large slabs of writing, maybe there could be more subheadings. ||
 * Recommendations?

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Summary of Feedback:
For each of the questions below consider including information about:
 * Content - clarity, quantity
 * Communicaiton - between the students as collaborators
 * Wiki Presentation - design, use of graphics, layout

Copy and paste into the discussion tab of the wiki page WITH the tag: sb_socialoperatingsystems in the **content** of the text **AND** a ***clear title *** that says: **Peer Review of [group name]**. Also place a hyperlink back to this wiki page so they can see your comments above.

//3 things that are very good about this wiki project.//

//2 suggestions for improving the wiki page.//

//1 piece of new knowledge our group has obtained thanks to this wiki page.//