CWeb+Wiki+C

**Student Reviewers:** **GRACE.A, JULIA.K, AND STEPH.T**

Topic reviewed: Collaboration Web Wiki - **ARTS, ENTERTAINMENT & LEISURE**
Criteria Descriptors || Student Reviewer Feedback || **Quality of Content** ||  || Does the content (writing) make sense? || Yes it is very clear to us and we understood the point you were trying to make. Some points were repeated a couple of times. || Can you identify any areas which need clarification? || Could you suggest what is going to happen in the near future, concerning collaboration for leisure? || Pose three questions that arise from your reading || Suggest in what direction you think, the collaborations webs are going to advance?

For your intro, you said that collaboration had a HUGE impact on arts, entertainment, etc. but you only described how collaboration changed the impact on the topics, briefly.

Maybe you could give your opinion about how collaboration whether this is good for the music, arts and entertainment industries || **Communication** ||  || Look at the Discussion pages of the wiki pages - effective communication? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">The communication was very good we think. Because the member called kyle, took active responsibility straight away. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Do they need more? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">The other members of the group could have contributed to the conversation of getting organized, from what we saw only two people, were in that conversation. (not enough collaboration) || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Are they clear in their messages to each other? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">They are very clear, and got straight to the point. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Is there a sense of negotiation and collaboration? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Yes there is negotiation, because Kyle, offered positions to everyone else, and didn’t assign jobs. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">**Collaboration** ||  || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Does the work appear to be equally shared? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Not really, it seems to use that Kyle did most of the work, but the others aren’t far behind. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Does there appear to be any difficulties by one or more members of the team? || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">There wasn’t a lot of collaboration, so we can’t say that we recognized any difficulties. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">**Presentation - Layout and Design** ||  || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Amount and relevance of graphics and media - comment on that || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">We think that it was lacking colour and graphics. It was like wikipedia, informative yet slightly on the boring side. We did enjoy all the links, especially the jazz group. It was funky and interesting to see music could be written by strangers. || <span style="font-family: Arial, sans-serif">Recommendations? || NEED MORE COLOUR AND LIFE. Put in some pictures!! Bigger font. =] ||